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Thursday, 27 March 2014
Letter to Gallipoli
was learning how to do a letter to gallipoli
I found this work easy because I did it be for.
one thing I did well in this doing faster
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
Kyle, the letter from Gallipoli starts off very well, but in a real letter you would not start and end so abruptly. You would enquire, as my example showed you, of family members health and well-being and you would ask about friends and neighbours. Then you might ease into what it is really like in war.
1 comment:
Kyle, the letter from Gallipoli starts off very well, but in a real letter you would not start and end so abruptly. You would enquire, as my example showed you, of family members health and well-being and you would ask about friends and neighbours. Then you might ease into what it is really like in war.
Next time you can work on the above.
Miss H
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